The rest of the world quieted into nothing. In that moment, after ten long years, Celaena looked at Chaol and realized she was home.

君子不救人，不是不愿意，而是能力不足。

The secret to living is giving.

你不能让恐惧支配你的生活。

Editing is not just about cutting; it's about finding the rhythm and pace of the story.

问题陈述得好，问题就解决了一半。