首先,你应该写作来取悦自己。你根本不应该在乎其他任何人。
The best editing is the kind that you don't notice; it's seamless and serves the story.
There is no man, however wise, who has not at some period of his youth said things, or lived in a way the consciousness of which is so unpleasant to him in later life that he would gladly, if he could, expunge it from his memory.